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Umbilical Ironicy by Meeq Umbilical Ironicy by Meeq
Umbilical Ironicy-Written by Meeq

I have this kord around my neck
Convincing threads of skin to come loose
I've tried to receive a breath
Disappointingly little has passed through
My stomach's umbilical is holding my face
She's usually nice - It's an unusual day
Alone you left me here, Forgotten and bleeding
Tell your tomorrow that I never will be

Never meant to be seen, Just a never born child
Silently crying, Watching the hands of the clock remain idle
My only mistake was being conceived
Born to die, an Umbilical Ironicy

Suspended in nothingness, With this kord tearing my neck
My hope is drowning while I'm realizing the sad truth
My fear revealed my birth was never meant
Sorrow resides in thoughts of never seeing you
My face is turning blue, My body's fainting cold
I'm looking to these naked walls for something to hold
Reluctantly accepting this, I loosen my clutching skin
Take one last breath and give in

Never meant to be seen Just a never born child
Silently watching the hands of the clock remain idle
My only mistake was being conceived
Born to die and Umbilical Ironicy

Do the voiceless deserve the chance to be saved
Or are some born to die torn fading stains?
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:iconrawien:
rawien Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it all!
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Meeq Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
Thank you so much! :hug:
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Sweet---Madness Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
I like both words and art, well done!
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Meeq Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
Thank you very much! :D
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vimark Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice artwork
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:iconmeeq:
Meeq Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
Thank you very much! :)
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Juss-in-time Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's wonderful!
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Meeq Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
Thank you! :hug:
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:iconmeeq:
Meeq Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
Thanks a lot! :hug:
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artconscript Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
Great effective effects!Nice one!
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Blaumohn Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
Great one, love the pose!
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Meeq Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
Thank you very much :D
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GabrielKain Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2006
I knew a guy like that once.. worked at the 7-11 down the street...

Great image. Goes very well with the words. :thumbsup:
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Meeq Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2006
You knew Ha-bib too?! What a small world.

I tried my best to make the image and words go well together. Thanks so much for the kind comment. It's really appreciated.
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Magicade Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2005
this is your best piece so far! (my opinion....) i love the idea here!
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Meeq Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2005
lol!, I've been in love with this piece for a few years myself. The original was done 2 years ago. But with all the new techniques I learned with digital coloring, I decided to redo it the way I always had envisioned it in my head.

I always thought the idea of something that's suppossed to give us life , but ended up taking it away instead, was sorta sad and interesting.Your opinion counts for a lot!, Thanks so much for the kind words.
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Magicade Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2005
youre very welcome!
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TimeWalker Featured By Owner May 23, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
nice
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Meeq Featured By Owner May 23, 2005
Thanks dude, That's another revision. The older one is DEAD
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SmokeTemple Featured By Owner May 21, 2005   General Artist
nice work, i like his relaxed pose
but the image is a little big, you should resize it
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Meeq Featured By Owner May 21, 2005
Thank you very much. Yea, i hate the zoomed in size of the picture. I'm not exactly sure how to change that... But if you see it in the normal state, its a decent size. Thanks for the comment=0))
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SmokeTemple Featured By Owner May 21, 2005   General Artist
if youre using paintshop or photoshop(and most image programs) open Edit in the bar on top, then "Resize Image"
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Meeq Featured By Owner May 21, 2005
I'm using photoshop. The thing is I size my images at 7x10, at least that's the canvas size. Is that the size I make smaller?
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disintegration86 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2005
Love the poem, and the illustration is great.. I think you just need to work a bit more on the typography
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Meeq Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2005
Thanks for the feedback bro, its really kind of you. Your absolutely right about the type. I had to cop out in this situation unfortunately.(limited choices). I checked out your photos and their sick dude. I'm gonna keep my eye on your work.

Meeq
"Because I can not walk without my conscience"
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BlackHare Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2005
it's so pretty. but so sad.....

>that baby has piercings!

I LOVE IT!
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Meeq Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2005
I know, but it happens. Thanks for the comment Anthony

Meeq
"Let a little bit of happiness undress in your head"
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KayodicWeazel Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2005
beautiful! i like it a lot!
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Meeq Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2005
Thank you so much. I'm digging your name kayodic and I really appreciate the comment & fav.

Meeq
"Let a little bit of happiness undress in your head"
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KayodicWeazel Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2005
s'allright man your art is worth looking at. i'll check out the rest of your gallery when i get out of school/go to lunch
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